Finally finished this and I have thoughts… firstly throughout the entire story I felt like I was kinda floating. I had absolutely no idea what ray’s objective was, to me it was like he got snatched up, tried to kill jiskar, got aggressively diddled and tortured (I’ll come back to this part), then ran away with a veryyyy sexy hot Sephiroth lookalike (lots of emphasis on sexy he could step on my and I’d say thank you), to this hidden crazy elf world and got called a dwarf, went back to his man, dominated him and switched up the whole dynamic lmao and then continued to rage war against rebels in the country (honorable mention the dragons). Now it may seem like I’m just summarizing the story but it felt like a really bad trip like if you ate some expired shrooms or something. Back to the diddling part I think that breezed by really fast and honestly don’t even think that like it was even needed bc everyone js acted like nothing happened after jiskar killed that fucker, especially Ray?? Like this is your butt we’re talking about here, personally we should’ve had a torture the molester chapter but whatever, anyways in conclusion I wouldn’t say that it was rushed but like we were 20 miles over the speed limit once we got past the middle of story. I think I’m done tho toodles!（￣へ￣）
Finally finished this and I have thoughts… firstly throughout the entire story I felt like I was kinda floating. I had absolutely no idea what ray’s objective was, to me it was like he got snatched up, tried to kill jiskar, got aggressively diddled and tortured (I’ll come back to this part), then ran away with a veryyyy sexy hot Sephiroth lookalike (lots of emphasis on sexy he could step on my and I’d say thank you), to this hidden crazy elf world and got called a dwarf, went back to his man, dominated him and switched up the whole dynamic lmao and then continued to rage war against rebels in the country (honorable mention the dragons). Now it may seem like I’m just summarizing the story but it felt like a really bad trip like if you ate some expired shrooms or something. Back to the diddling part I think that breezed by really fast and honestly don’t even think that like it was even needed bc everyone js acted like nothing happened after jiskar killed that fucker, especially Ray?? Like this is your butt we’re talking about here, personally we should’ve had a torture the molester chapter but whatever, anyways in conclusion I wouldn’t say that it was rushed but like we were 20 miles over the speed limit once we got past the middle of story. I think I’m done tho toodles!（￣へ￣）