Yapperoni time, you have been warned

Phrog_bum September 1, 2025 8:20 am

Finally finished this and I have thoughts… firstly throughout the entire story I felt like I was kinda floating. I had absolutely no idea what ray’s objective was, to me it was like he got snatched up, tried to kill jiskar, got aggressively diddled and tortured (I’ll come back to this part), then ran away with a veryyyy sexy hot Sephiroth lookalike (lots of emphasis on sexy he could step on my and I’d say thank you), to this hidden crazy elf world and got called a dwarf, went back to his man, dominated him and switched up the whole dynamic lmao and then continued to rage war against rebels in the country (honorable mention the dragons). Now it may seem like I’m just summarizing the story but it felt like a really bad trip like if you ate some expired shrooms or something. Back to the diddling part I think that breezed by really fast and honestly don’t even think that like it was even needed bc everyone js acted like nothing happened after jiskar killed that fucker, especially Ray?? Like this is your butt we’re talking about here, personally we should’ve had a torture the molester chapter but whatever, anyways in conclusion I wouldn’t say that it was rushed but like we were 20 miles over the speed limit once we got past the middle of story. I think I’m done tho toodles!( ̄へ ̄)

Responses
    caw September 12, 2025 8:12 am

    this... this what exactly what im thinking. the pacing goes from 40km to 100km so fast lmaoo. ( not to say that the art changed.)

    wheres the empress fam execution? did they just offed in the background? we just know that the little crown prince gets exiled, and its from the extra chapter what the heck. also i really really want to see mc meet his half brother, its feel like such a waste not to explore that.

    this manhwa have so much potential tbh. they have a good start, but then it get rushed and lost their direction. MC have a good character, while ML... hmm how should i say, a bit bland like cut-cardboard of ML's characters because they didn't get to tell his POV clearly. so much potential wasted man... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    Phrog_bum September 13, 2025 2:47 am
    this... this what exactly what im thinking. the pacing goes from 40km to 100km so fast lmaoo. ( not to say that the art changed.)wheres the empress fam execution? did they just offed in the background? we just ... caw

    Yes yes, there’s so many loose ends lmao, in all honesty I’m glad it’s over and I don’t have to wreck my brain trying to understand it anymore ( ̄∇ ̄")