I think the story would have been better if less condensed. It’s a similar trope to those seen before, but because its so short and condensed the characters go through their journey too quickly for the reader accept it all as believable. Also due to this quick progression the seme doesn’t regret long enough and the Uke forgives too quick and things appear to be fixed too easily. I do not know the reason for this shortness (laziness, time-crunch?), but this was the wrong type of story to try to fit into 10 chapters.
I think the story would have been better if less condensed. It’s a similar trope to those seen before, but because its so short and condensed the characters go through their journey too quickly for the reader accept it all as believable. Also due to this quick progression the seme doesn’t regret long enough and the Uke forgives too quick and things appear to be fixed too easily.
I do not know the reason for this shortness (laziness, time-crunch?), but this was the wrong type of story to try to fit into 10 chapters.