First of all, I cringed so much in the first chapter. I dunno, it's kinda awkward.
Second, the pace of the story is... the first part is shallow and the second chapter is... the information is just suddenly slammed to the face. Inconsistent pacing as I might say.
Also, i hope this won't be another love triangle.
Other than that, I'll still read it since it's not really all that bad. It may not be perfect but it still holds some mystery that interests me.
First of all, I cringed so much in the first chapter. I dunno, it's kinda awkward.
Second, the pace of the story is... the first part is shallow and the second chapter is... the information is just suddenly slammed to the face. Inconsistent pacing as I might say.
Also, i hope this won't be another love triangle.
Other than that, I'll still read it since it's not really all that bad. It may not be perfect but it still holds some mystery that interests me.