My only gripe with this…

Orange_Kumquat September 14, 2025 5:59 pm

The story was so rushed and short already, it did not need a love rival.

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    Macy September 23, 2025 12:21 am

    I gotta disagree on it being rushed, the story seemed paced perfectly well to me. I think maybe it being so short is why it may seem rushed, but it really isn’t. But I guess it’s just a matter of opinion