i'm not going to lie this story is weird like i'm having a real hard time following the whiplash of character actions and emotions. it all seems so wildly out of pocket and random at all times. it's not even that they're immature it's just disconnected, almost written like a random series of events rather than anything with any cohesion. i get what the author is trying to say but it's just not coming across.
i'm
not going to lie
this story is weird
like i'm having a real hard time following the whiplash of character actions and emotions. it all seems so wildly out of pocket and random at all times. it's not even that they're immature it's just disconnected, almost written like a random series of events rather than anything with any cohesion. i get what the author is trying to say but it's just not coming across.