Everyone is always licking up the art but I feel like we can't see shit when they are figh...

It's very heavily implied he abused her.

Who wants to draw a child being beat by a grown man?

It's on you to use your ability to infer rather than have to be shown everything explicitly.

Yeah sure whatever for Shuri being abused my point still stands they never show anything properly be it a fight or a past even its all on vibes and dark pages taking half the chapter

I believe the fault lies not in the artist, but in the rating of the novel, maybe if they were to show those details, it wouldn't be pg, or something?

There's another manhwa I'm following (How to Get My Husband on My Side), and in the comments they were saying that in the novel, it's much more gruesome. But of course, they couldn't show it, because that would be too much.

If that is the case, I am grateful that they didn't completely erase the fact that she was abused, because it's a huge part in the story.

Now that makes more sense than whatever bullshit the previous yuri said about how I should use my ability to imagine like an idiot.
You make sense and I can see why they didn’t show Shuri's abuse properly but still it really ticked me off bc Jeremy is supposedly attacking a white robed guy but we can't see anything of what happened (he cut him?? Broke his hand?? Pushed him away?? Nothing was shown properly and that was just a fight) and its not the first time imo that the artist doesn’t know how to visualize a physical scene but clearly the pg could have been a reason and the part with the jewelry she received as a child it was shown so badly

ALSO how to get my husband on my side is so good the artist really managed to describe Ruby's abuse and even went as far as draw the incestious kiss and although I gagged in my pov if an author is going to 'write' the abuse then they should show the impact of the abuse even if that means showing the abuse or else its not as impactful and some readers get crazy ideas. Like some ppl LIKE ceasare 'bc he is hotttt' even though no?? That mf is a rat??
The author of broken ring even said that she made Ines' rape so graphic and repulsive because some readers without that would be capable of shipping ines with Oscar I cant believe some people

That's it for my ted talk

to be honest I think it’s a you problem for not seeing what others could understand just fine. but it's also understandable that not everyone can get implications and subtle flows. one of the reason why the abuse I this manhwa is not as graphic as ruby and ines is because Shuri never suffered it long term
it was in the heat of the moment when Johannes went cray, plus the stress she has accumulated by having no one by her side adding the fact that she has been suppressing her trauma. Also none of the adults were willing to dig it up too so they burried it in everyones POV.

I am also concerned about the pg censorship, the artist took out some parts that makes this story disturbing like how shuri was literally butchered to death in her previous life.

btw htgmhoms And this shared the same author, I just think it's a fun fact to add lmao.

-English is not my first language

Nah, I agree with the original comment. Some things aren't clear enough. I feel like they could be portrayed better. Like this chapter's action scene: when the holy knight attacked Jeremy from behind. We were able to infer that, yes. But if felt like a waste to not clearly know what was going on. How serious was it? We aren't able to comprehend the degree of the matter.

It can also be the fact that these kind of stories get clearer as it goes on. Meaning- it's purposefully drawn that way so that the suspense is maintained and everything gets cleared up later.

Yeah I can tell english is not your first language. You just pissed me off so bad Ill do my best to piss you off too.

First of all, I can read subtle lines just fine YOU DONT KNOW ME I KNOW THE WHOLE STORY DUH I just pointed out that IT COULD BE CLEARER??? LIKE NO SHIT SHERLOCK SHE WAS ABUSED AND JEREMY HIT THE GUY IS IT SO WRONG FOR ME TO WANT AN ARTIST TO DO HER JOB???

'Not everyone can get implications and subtle flows' just who the fuck are you to come in MY COMMENT SECTION and talk to me like that who do you think you are to know me and just assume I cant see bigger than my nose just because I made one critique of the artist after pulling the same shit for 148 chapters THIS ENTIRE STORY IS WRITTEN AND DRAWN LIKE THAT

The rest of your point made total sense but I just decided that I hate you so if you write to me again I will block you since you decided that it was a me problem. Dont piss people off on the internet next time if you want to have a proper conversation.

I love you for understanding me

i’ve also decided that i hate you, so i’m using my free will to reply to you.

genuinely what is wrong with you? what, do you want a trophy that your english is sooo good? what an odd thing to say to someone. their statement about how not everyone can understand implications and subtle flows isn’t even a rude thing to say, it’s just a fact. if you’re offended by it then… i guess the shoe just fits lmao.

if you dislike the art and story so much, just go read the novel. it’s not like the artist can see your comment on here and take your feedback/criticism into mind.

how ironic of you. you can’t even handle a simple remark & got offended so easily, yet you mention having a “proper conversation”. if you can criticise something/someone, don’t be surprised if you’ll receive some back too. isn’t that just basic knowledge?

don’t worry, by the time you see this, you’ll be blocked. pissed me off seeing your negative energy in the comments.

Can people stop answering to this like you have nothing better to do it really kills you when someone has a different opinion huh I genuinely do NOT care if you disagree with me the day mangago adds the possibility to block replies is the day people will breathe.

Tomato sauce blocked me but I will answer anyway because if someone answers negatively on my take one more time I will explode.
People I was rude to always decided that they knew me soooo well and that if I criticized this chapter it must mean Im some imbecile who cannot read between the lines and I have no regret on insulting openly those who decided that I was too stupid to take a hint from Orka smh.
So if anyone answers ONE MORE TIME that I should supposedly have better literary abilities even though I am majoring in that field hell yes you will receive trash talk from me.

You should all get off your high horses and let people express themselves on the internet why should the artist goddamn know I dont like her pace? As if comments dont exist to love laugh and trash a story

I will not delete what I think just to please taumato sauces and what not. Get your own opinion dislike or like just like the 30 people who agreed with me and try not to butt in with your trump syndrome of 'everyone deserves MY opinion and someone else's opinion'