
i get that this is how you keep readers on the edge of their seats and wanting more but also get the feeling its being executed a bit sloppily in my opinion, thats all
and i hope its boxer guy losing his mind like you said haha otherwise i think it will take too long still for anything to progress orrrr maybe some other kind of more extreme occurrence is going to be the trigger for it

The last option you mentioned might as well be most probable cause I have a feeling the author might want to go from slow burn to BURN burn to keep us engaged. Tbh I don't mind the slow burn but I get what you mean.
It's like a delayed orgasm - it just feels better when you edge it right, but edge it too much and it just hurts like a bish
im confused by where this is going like
ok mc still seems a little hesitant about sleeping with ml but.... what are they waiting for, did they agree on anything already? or i guess they really are just waiting for the mc to give ml what he wants?