I think Yaoi should stop adding random SA plot-lines if they aren't even going to handle i...

Irene September 24, 2025 2:07 pm

I think Yaoi should stop adding random SA plot-lines if they aren't even going to handle it properly. Authors insert that shit just to gloss over it like some very minor inconvenience like wow. What the fuck was the point even?

Chapter 10 is SO weird because if the goal was to make Ren reject the manager, why even show him "accepting" the manager? He has been shown to have moved on from the manager so that moment of vulnerability seems really unnecessary in this stage of their relationship.

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    Staph September 25, 2025 1:36 pm

    I also think the SA is unnecessary but I think the "accepting" scene made sense. When you're in a state where you can't make a choice between silence and passion, I think it's hard to make a conscious decision, hence why he took the time to process. Makes a lot of sense

    Morii September 29, 2025 3:10 am

    God I hate these tropes. I get it if it was just a processing state when that groomer went close to kiss him, and then he pushed that groomer away. But then he stayed with him, just to think?

    Alright man. Also why did they book an Inn again? I don’t feel like re reading, got a migraine.

    Morii September 29, 2025 3:13 am
    I also think the SA is unnecessary but I think the "accepting" scene made sense. When you're in a state where you can't make a choice between silence and passion, I think it's hard to make a conscious decision,... Staph

    I’m having a hard time understanding why he stayed with the groomer at an Inn, just for him to realize so quickly. Uuugh I think it just felt rushed so I was confused when he just decided to go to Hayato after it seemed like he accepted that Groomer.

    The pace annoys me but it’s okay….

    Morii September 29, 2025 3:15 am
    I also think the SA is unnecessary but I think the "accepting" scene made sense. When you're in a state where you can't make a choice between silence and passion, I think it's hard to make a conscious decision,... Staph

    And like OP said, it also doesn’t make sense that he expected Hayato to come for him…like what. I think it’s inconsistent writing or bad writing but that’s just my opinion and maybe my poor brain.

    Staph September 29, 2025 3:19 am

    But to him it was his confidant, he didn't know it was a groomer/didn't think the guy would be

    Morii September 29, 2025 3:31 am
    But to him it was his confidant, he didn't know it was a groomer/didn't think the guy would be Staph

    Honestly what victim would realize yet