That was good

starfish September 25, 2025 3:04 pm

I feel like it woupdv3 been an actual masterpiece if it had more chapters and had fleshed out the backstories and even the general events better than just brushing over it within 4-5 panels. Like I want my heart to clench and hurt more you feel me? I wanna SOB. This had the potential frfr. But the read was good. Matsumoto the mvp lol

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    nico November 18, 2025 11:49 pm

    Literally my exact thoughts. I love this work, I come read it from time to time, I think is great and it will always have a special place in my heart but in this last re-read I just couldn't help but notice it needed more chapters to flesh things out properly, specially with the interesting premise and setting and how nice the author created the ambience of the story (dk if I make sense). Like, common you had all the story beats for absolute great angst, you even have a massive national disaster -that honestly we don't see much in bls and the event actually happen in real life- and have them separate for five years, show me the life trought out those years, show me the pain, the struggle, the longing, MAKE ME HUUUURT, MAKE ME HURT BIG TIME

    starfish November 24, 2025 1:46 pm
    Literally my exact thoughts. I love this work, I come read it from time to time, I think is great and it will always have a special place in my heart but in this last re-read I just couldn't help but notice it ... nico

    EXACTLYYYYYYYY LIKE GET ME MORE ATTACHED TO THEM SO I CAN FEEL THE HEARTBREAK AND CRY LIKE A TON YKWIM. THE POTENTIAL IT HAS TO BE HEART WRENCHING PIECE OF ART HAS ME PUNCHING THE AIR