Responses
That's true... This reminds me of how old romance stories were written that doesn't just serve one POV and by serve I mean in favor of one Character. Or at least to those that I remember.
The story isn't only being told it was telling itself, and we get that because the characters weren't added as an ornament for the sake of it that seems to be a trend for years. In here they add to the events as if they were alive and we're reading about lives of real people.
To write like this is sometimes hard to do though, so kudos to the author of Broken Ring and those who tried.
EVERY WRITER ON THE PLANET NEEDS TO TAKE NOTES! This is how you write a d’aman love story. Equal parts mystery, heartache and longing.