I've read up to 23chp I just can't continue this anymore. What is this even supposed to be??? Adventurers aim for the strongest in hidden classes??? Reborn Ranker – Gravity User???
23chps and all I've seen is instead of aiming to be the strongest. The only thing going on, on all of those 20 chps is just him doing side quest and aiming to tell stories that isn't even about him at all more like aiming to be the story teller of all characters except for the MC. They had 20 chapters that they could've used to introduce the MC and 1st supporting character but nah they went ahead and used all that to tell so little about the MC WHO IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE FOCUS, THE HOOK that'll make you stay to read and root for, NO they just had to went ahead and introduced every single NPC and their story. They couldn't even make a proper hook under 20chps Cuz all they do to keep you reading is just put cliff hangers on every fighting scene and once those fighting scenes are over they'll just slap it with some really underwhelming sob story lesson from every NPC etc etc. Instead of introducing and giving more screen time for the MC they used all those for NPCs with sloppy stories and characters
I've read up to 23chp
I just can't continue this anymore. What is this even supposed to be??? Adventurers aim for the strongest in hidden classes??? Reborn Ranker – Gravity User???
23chps and all I've seen is instead of aiming to be the strongest. The only thing going on, on all of those 20 chps is just him doing side quest and aiming to tell stories that isn't even about him at all more like aiming to be the story teller of all characters except for the MC. They had 20 chapters that they could've used to introduce the MC and 1st supporting character but nah they went ahead and used all that to tell so little about the MC WHO IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE FOCUS, THE HOOK that'll make you stay to read and root for, NO they just had to went ahead and introduced every single NPC and their story. They couldn't even make a proper hook under 20chps Cuz all they do to keep you reading is just put cliff hangers on every fighting scene and once those fighting scenes are over they'll just slap it with some really underwhelming sob story lesson from every NPC etc etc. Instead of introducing and giving more screen time for the MC they used all those for NPCs with sloppy stories and characters