I read it all and I dont wanna be a hater bc I was trying to see where this is going but ngl the writing is so ass and incohesive fym his parents are alive and hes one of the richest ppl in the world and then could just...magically disappear for months while a hobo kidnapped him??? And nobody gave a fuck?? also why the hell did he go back to dominic if hes one of the RICHEST PPL ALIVE??? and has RICH PARENTS TOO tHAT CLEARLY LOVE HIM??? like fym he needed dominics support????????????????????? girl? and now dominic just comes with them on vacation like???? hello??? this is so ass omg its giving "random bs go" and just making shit up on the fly like two completely different stories from start to finish stiched together lmao just make AUs for this kinda shit man
I read it all and I dont wanna be a hater bc I was trying to see where this is going but ngl the writing is so ass and incohesive fym his parents are alive and hes one of the richest ppl in the world and then could just...magically disappear for months while a hobo kidnapped him??? And nobody gave a fuck?? also why the hell did he go back to dominic if hes one of the RICHEST PPL ALIVE??? and has RICH PARENTS TOO tHAT CLEARLY LOVE HIM??? like fym he needed dominics support????????????????????? girl?
and now dominic just comes with them on vacation like???? hello??? this is so ass omg its giving "random bs go" and just making shit up on the fly like two completely different stories from start to finish stiched together lmao just make AUs for this kinda shit man