I enjoyed this a lot and found it very cute, but I also agreed with a lot of what you said. Incomplete plot threads galore, lol
I'm glad you enjoyed it, like I said there IS an audience for it, which I'm just not part of ^^
I can deal with a few plot holes, 99%of the stories have some, but here it was just too much for my taste, literally everything that happened went nowhere beside the little romance (it was cute, that s what made me rate it higher than 0, but I just can't appreciate a story that forgets everything it was telling me about and send me away with just a cute little happy ending)
You know, more holes than plot...
the woman lookalike was set up for when hyeon’s sister saw baekya. very clumsy imo, but it basically established that baekya could pass as a woman, so the sister thought he was one.
Oh really? Well indeed it was very badly executed xD I didn't even once linked the big sis and the mysterious woman, but now that you say it , it may be related... Maybe all the rest is also related to something but it didn't hit me at all, I still feel more holes than plot in this book.
But given the rating, I'm probably the black sheep again so if others enjoyed the story, it's okay, my opinion is not a worldwide absolute truth lol
BRO I literally just finished this. I had such high hopes because of cute art and such a good rating, even from the summary and the pictures it looked like it would be my cup of tea but was I wrong. Like you said, they acted like 12 year olds. I liked it at the beginning, no, I was obsessed for a moment, but it all went downhill ever since Hyeon kissed Baekya and Baekya got mad. Ever since then, I have no idea how I managed to read it to the very end. It got so annoying that I found it funny that they even got together after Baekya running away so many times. Not to mention the disconnected details that you mentioned. This was such a disappointment for me
Same the rating really did us wrong, I just feel betrayed... I usually love shounen ai with no smut and cute kids but it really didn't go my way this time.
Is this finished?
Nobody's gonna explain the gift and love letter in his locker?
Why was it even in the story?
And the bff rollercoaster love life, same, it just ends in the middle of the fight with his boyfriend because he's not the protagonist so no one cares?
Why is it in the story then?
And the woman lookalike, it's just... There... For nothing?
Whyyyyyy is it in the booooooook theeeen?
And the sister's misunderstanding about the MC's sex, did that also fall in a hole of the plot?
WHY WAS IT IN HERE THEN!
Seriously did Dory write this story?
It's bad, it's empty af and everything is unfinished.
Also why do they look and act like they're 12... And where TF are all these kids parents ffs !?!
There's nothing for me in here.
I'm sure there's an audience for this, but it's not me.