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REAL! i’m barely in but their romance seems very flat and i don’t sense any tension between them （￣へ￣）
I tried so hard to like it someone on tt recommended it and I was like okay lemme check it out BUT THIS IS JUST SO SO SO BORING
This is a completely subjective opinion so take it with a grain of salt. I would like to appreciate the good parts first - both the guys are green flags, the ml is not an asshole alpha and the mc is also quite okay. Both of them are very rational characters and have more than a single braincell most of the time. I think that's pretty much it.
Now onto the wierd/bad parts
1. I don't see any chemistry between the ml and mc. It's just awkward and shit
2. The pacing is insanely fast. They're talking about bonding as mates and stuff in the like first 10 chapters like wth
3. The people around the mc seem strangely coercive and keep pushing him towards the ml for no reason. Like bro you don't even know this man. Why would you be so comfy with pushing someone you care about towards a stranger
4. The characters themselves are pretty flat. No other dimensions except their job and the soulmate thing going on between them.
5. The dialogue is not very interesting from the get go. I read 20 chapters and there's such random stuff happening with no plot progression...just panels and panels and panels of god knows what. NOTHING IS FUCKING HAPPENING. They keep talking about bonding and going out and becoming mates when there's actually such less effort being put into getting to know each other as people....idk there's worse I've read but this is just plain boring with an excuse of a plot
6. Im not really a fan of the artstyle.
(And lastly, if you enjoyed defining an alpha, you'll like this.)