Responses
This is such a gentle way to turn down a story and critizing it at the same time. Honestly a fresh air with how obnoxious people can be in the comment section with something that their not cup of tea.
Yeah Theon pledging to his new "master" seemed weird and like we missed a couple steps. Frankly the author could have just kept him neutral or on the side of the sisters instead of the elder council and it would have worked fine
I’m being honest with my nonsense here, and I know I might get chewed out for saying this, but I really don’t like how Theon ended up swearing loyalty to MC instead of Calista. In the previous timeline, he originally worked under Calista, so it kinda feels like the MC stole one of Calista’s most reliable allies
As a reader, I think it would’ve been fine if Calista were portrayed as an actual villain. Then Theon switching sides wouldn’t bother me this much. But with how the narration has been so far, it’s clear that Calista was never a bad person, so maybe that’s why this whole thing rubs me the wrong way.
I’m sorry, but I’ve decided to stop reading this after chapter 18. I realized it’s just not my cup of tea. Since I haven’t read the rest, I don’t have the right to judge the story any further. I’m mainly leaving this comment as a little footprint for myself, just in case I come across this story again in the future and forget whether I’ve already read it or not—considering how bad my memory is.