I actually dislike our mc design What's up with that one moon shaped hair on her forehead ...

Memoriesmade November 3, 2025 6:19 pm

I actually dislike our mc design
What's up with that one moon shaped hair on her forehead that doesn't move
She somehow feel more like a doll than a human

Responses
    Dr-Erotica November 3, 2025 7:18 pm

    isn't that her appearance description though? "she looks like one of those sugar dolls"

    Judi November 4, 2025 12:53 am

    Yeah that's why heiner is obsessed with her or else he could've easily forgotten her. These beautiful stories doesn't suit y'all go find the same genre and plot you read every time

    Memoriesmade November 4, 2025 12:20 pm
    Yeah that's why heiner is obsessed with her or else he could've easily forgotten her. These beautiful stories doesn't suit y'all go find the same genre and plot you read every time Judi

    Since when a story "suits" someone, it's not a piece of clothing

    Memoriesmade November 4, 2025 12:22 pm
    isn't that her appearance description though? "she looks like one of those sugar dolls" Dr-Erotica

    But then, shouldn't we get to see her look more and more human as the story advances? Like if it was done on purpose
    As she gets out of her shell, I feel like her design could change a bit too

    Judi November 4, 2025 2:03 pm
    But then, shouldn't we get to see her look more and more human as the story advances? Like if it was done on purpose As she gets out of her shell, I feel like her design could change a bit too Memoriesmade

    She wasn't a doll because of make up, he was smitten with her since they were kids, that's the point.

    Memoriesmade November 5, 2025 2:24 pm
    She wasn't a doll because of make up, he was smitten with her since they were kids, that's the point. Judi

    I'm not saying the opposite
    I just dislike the way she's drawn
    She's completely white- her skin doesnt look natural, that moon hair pisses me off
    And if it was done on purpose to suit the narrative that she grew up like a sheltered doll, I feel like she might have started to grow tan the moment she left Heiner's house after their divorce, the moon hair might have grown a bit too, idk.

    Judi November 5, 2025 11:32 pm
    I'm not saying the opposite I just dislike the way she's drawn She's completely white- her skin doesnt look natural, that moon hair pisses me offAnd if it was done on purpose to suit the narrative that she grew... Memoriesmade

    Actually that's how white skinned people are + she has been weak ever since being a child +. Depression made her eat less, losing lots of colors. + She used to be vibrant and her skin was somewhat pink when she was a kid/teenager. And in the extras you see her skin color also changed. If her design is pissing you off idk what to say it might be a you problem... + Heiner used to be pale although he was a soldier, more outgoing, and has to endure the battlefield unlike her who held a parasol all the time + in the extra they gained a bit of colors bcs they started living in a hot place, I'm in germany and paranoia is supposed to be in europe or smth, but you don't get to see the sun very well for 9 months and once summer is here you get fried quickly so you have to stay home or walk with suncream or an umbrella, even if you go outside sll summer, you won't get that tan at all, her design wasn't a problem at all it matched the story well + that moon hair is cute, we call it baby hair, this part never grows longer and can't be removed easily, never minded that detail

    Memoriesmade November 6, 2025 12:28 am
    Actually that's how white skinned people are + she has been weak ever since being a child +. Depression made her eat less, losing lots of colors. + She used to be vibrant and her skin was somewhat pink when she... Judi

    Gee, I looked at the last update, no one is as pale as her
    She's the only one who looks like that in the story and
    I agree, maybe it is a me problem, because I dont think that makes her pretty
    I think it looks eerie
    You can think the moon hair is cute, i think it looks fake, doll-ish, unrealistic and distracting
    While I'm at it, the color of her eyes is annoying too
    Just opinions dont take it too seriously please, I just dont like her design