Can someone vouch for me? A novel reader of this story?? Like I feel like I can see how...

MeowMeowBitch November 6, 2025 1:08 pm

Can someone vouch for me? A novel reader of this story??


Like I feel like I can see how the author wants the story to progress but for some reason the artist who's doing the adaptation is confusing how it can interpreted by how she drew some scenes. Translation ain't helping it either.

I feel that some scenes r either super exaggerated and some not exaggerated enough.

Worst victim here is the ML. I can see what the author wants him to (a cheerful boy made to be a king) but how the artist drew him sometimes makes him look immature and dumb...

Or maybe he is. Idfk.

ACTUALLY IDFK! THIS STORY IS SO CONFUSING!

ESPECIALLY THE ML!

He learned who has her hostage and shit she might have went through but dawg is having a blast and only worrying about rumors...

Idfk- maybe a lil more realization in his part would be great? Like "ah shi- the girl I like and the daughter of my master is having a hard time. I can't do anything rn but I should make myself better and do things better so we can protect her when she arrives" shit like that? No?? Okay.

Responses
    luvv November 6, 2025 8:38 pm

    Exactly, and their meeting at the fountain had me at my wits end. Hello, once in a blue moon chance of meeting and all they do is awkwardly flirt! Boy, that’s a missing person you’re taking to! Should you think of a way to communicate? Keep in touch? The boy was mentored by the best magic user before, surely he could have whipped up a plan pr two. If it couldn’t be done immediately, later on the girl could whip it up herself. The girl seemed quite free considering her situation, she could get supplies one way or another. Why didn’t she ask about the current political climate? She was so curious, shouldn’t she ask about the noble house she’s staying at? Why doesn’t the girl tell the boy about byron’s plans? His future plans and where they are staying at? Why not tell them that she is cursed and if they could catch them, she should tell them that retaliation should be thought out and bring some curse breakers! Does the curse entail nothing could be revealed? But what of the situation where she warned the soldiers she defeated a few chapter’s back. Why are their iq so low?

    MeowMeowBitch November 8, 2025 7:11 am
    Exactly, and their meeting at the fountain had me at my wits end. Hello, once in a blue moon chance of meeting and all they do is awkwardly flirt! Boy, that’s a missing person you’re taking to! Should you t... luvv

    Ikr??? I'm actually scared for the ML lmao- he's being written like he's a Mary sue but male lol

    Mavikelebek November 18, 2025 8:27 pm
    Exactly, and their meeting at the fountain had me at my wits end. Hello, once in a blue moon chance of meeting and all they do is awkwardly flirt! Boy, that’s a missing person you’re taking to! Should you t... luvv

    Let's not forget the fact that author wants us to believe that FL, the one that turn back time after lots of hardship and dying, has adult mentality, immediately fall in love with around 14 years old boy, in their first meeting for no appereant reason lol. I could understand how ML fall for her given she was hero for him , but still even that is not enough coverage for the love they show off.

    If i regressed in that mental age I would think of him as a cute child not my future lover ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭