Lmao, fr! Like the part "oh, I am dreaming" and then they just do whatever they want kind of seem to fake. I was like, what do you mean you're in a dream when both of your conversations doesn't seen like a dream. I thought he was being delusional lol, until i saw he wake from the bed and the brother was there, i was like oh it is a dream lol. So I am thinking maybe it is a little fantasy story a little, like both of their dream is connected since I also see ml pov of his dream. Yk those type of story where their dream is connected bc this or that.
Same! You bring up another good point tho, who in their right mind would just be like "Oh the other person is also thinking they're dreaming, guess it's only my dream" like be fr! lol
My first thought would be to figure out if we're both dreaming together just by the flow of the conversation.
I think these types of stories have huge potential if executed well like "It's just a dream right?".
Yeahs. Also, it is common sense that when ppl dream, they don't feel pain. But mc said he feel pain, so it doesn't seem like he has a dreams when he said that. I only read this bc i like the concept that mc is trying to give up on his crush, which I am guessing probably not happening. (⌒▽⌒)
Alright I powered through all 8 chapters and yeah the art is serving but the story ain't.
First off the whole "oh I'm dreaming, I can do whatever" only kinda works when it's in thoughts only, I mean how many times did each of them say "I'm dreaming" and gee I wonder why the other person suddenly starts acting sketchy around me in real life?
Not connecting the obvious dots is driving me up a wall and is frankly just bad writing....speaking of bad writing, is it the translation or do most of the conversations make absolutely no sense.
Edit: Saw the comments on here and it's Paradise Scans, go figure.
First the friend suggests Mc and Brother go well together and then in a flashback he's called a pedophile, pick one?
Now onto the one thing I did enjoy, I like a twisted Top, not this one but generally a kind looking and gentle Top who turns out to be a bit messed up in the head.
It tickles that part of my brain that is also into masochistic Tops ya know.
I wonder why I even bothered reading this, probably because of the art and honestly I'll stick around either actually reading or skimming through for the art.