Responses
I get what you mean. I felt it was missing more passion maybe? Their first time was so...blah. If I was nao-san I'd have asked "is that it?" It was good but definitely could have been better.
I agree.it was missing something..the cop had more spark then those two..
I gave this a 4 since it's lacking something...I just don't know what. But this is a good read (▰˘◡˘▰)