Lmaoo no srsly tho, stories good but pacing’s so slow its boring like… holy inner monologues be taking half the chapter. “I miss him, where he at, come back, why he no msg me” girl get on w the story thats why the chapters are long but so short…
Lmaoo no srsly tho, stories good but pacing’s so slow its boring like… holy inner monologues be taking half the chapter. “I miss him, where he at, come back, why he no msg me” girl get on w the story th... yanyan_
How can you say it's boring tho... there's currently a ton of moving parts. Mint_choclit
I think thats part of the problem, theres so many things going on but the way its paced is so slow! No improvement in their relationship as well, only thing thats moved on is their skinship… The interaction between them is also quite repetitive
I know this is slow burn but it’s not burning, it’s just boring