This was nice to read. I find the pacing a bit off however. Spoiler; Like their first kiss...

RAZ November 9, 2025 1:27 pm

This was nice to read.
I find the pacing a bit off however. Spoiler; Like their first kiss and confession. MC's feelings changed a bit quickly. We actually did not see the bad brother at all(expect the paparazzi arc) after they got together witch is not what I expected. We didn't see his mother or father too. Idk. Could have been better. BUT their relationship is really cute. I like the smut too (≧∀≦)

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    plagg November 15, 2025 4:24 am

    hm i mean they did say the mc couldnt let go of the memories he had with the first brother rsther than still having a crush on him, he wasnt too sure if he liked the guy after all he did to mc, but i agree! a slightly longer slow burn wldve hit the spot heheh

    RAZ November 15, 2025 3:36 pm
    hm i mean they did say the mc couldnt let go of the memories he had with the first brother rsther than still having a crush on him, he wasnt too sure if he liked the guy after all he did to mc, but i agree! a s... plagg

    Yes. I am a huge fan of slow burn. I just know it would have been a lot deeper than faster burn like this.