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i was gonna post my review and i found out there's a novel??? maybe the novel is better ??? idk maybe i'll read it one day if it's translated and hopefully the story is better and the pacing is better
Sorry for all the grammar mistake i just noticed them... I still make mistakes when i write bc english isn't my first language
The art is good but the story isn't great honestly. If you want a quick story with smutt well idk if i would recommend it? honestly the smutt isn't the best in my opinion. It wasn't that interresting. I rec if you want a short story and not think. But if the author worked the story better it would have been good bc i see the potential.
I like stories, toxic or not, where you feel the love between the character but their love? It go too fast. Like it start with the smutt, then flasback, of hey hey knew each other before, BAM smutt with no build up, oh hey you thought he hated him bc of the first smutt scene? No actually he always loved him since young??? The bottom knew that but he ended up forgetting him ??? Oh smutt and they start dating. Honnestly if feel like a story that you start to have in you head and you explain the main points to your friend but instead to working it out you start to write it right away and that's it.