Author should learn how to deliver smut from some BL’s i meant it’s already decent but...

Xia2205 November 14, 2025 8:54 pm

Author should learn how to deliver smut from some BL’s i meant it’s already decent but could be peak

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    Mausi November 14, 2025 9:02 pm

    Yeaaaah. I’d like more scenes centered on Taeha. A lot of smut for women still focuses on the woman’s naked body while the guy is still fully dressed? Where’s my equality lol

    Daisy November 14, 2025 9:16 pm

    Honestly they should reference man with ghosts, it’s top tier.

    liy2002 November 14, 2025 9:18 pm
    Yeaaaah. I’d like more scenes centered on Taeha. A lot of smut for women still focuses on the woman’s naked body while the guy is still fully dressed? Where’s my equality lol Mausi

    we does get some equal gender equlity in this one tho , look how much face card tae ha is serving in that ep and his expression lol , also in the smut from ch 58 his muscle were so detailled for the female gaze lmao

    Sage November 14, 2025 10:14 pm

    He does go naked in other chapters. In this one the details of the tux was bland. He is about too take off his clothes or more like he can't wait to fuck her raw. After seeing Haesoo in such situation I don't think taeha is patient enough to remove all of his clothes in one go

    Mausi November 14, 2025 10:35 pm
    we does get some equal gender equlity in this one tho , look how much face card tae ha is serving in that ep and his expression lol , also in the smut from ch 58 his muscle were so detailled for the female gaze... liy2002

    The smut mostly focuses on her body and I wish it were more focused on his. Facial expressions are nice and all but I wouldn’t count that as smutty lol. Chapter 58 just has him shirtless and laying around beat up so I wouldn’t say it’s super female gaze. I think that’s where BL has a hand up on smut because they actually show the guys’ bodies where smut targeted towards ladies rarely focus on the man.

    Sage November 14, 2025 11:04 pm
    The smut mostly focuses on her body and I wish it were more focused on his. Facial expressions are nice and all but I wouldn’t count that as smutty lol. Chapter 58 just has him shirtless and laying around bea... Mausi

    Girl you can see his ass in one of the chapters. He's butt naked with her.

    Sage November 14, 2025 11:08 pm
    The smut mostly focuses on her body and I wish it were more focused on his. Facial expressions are nice and all but I wouldn’t count that as smutty lol. Chapter 58 just has him shirtless and laying around bea... Mausi

    Well I don't agree with you. I feel this Manhwa is very much focus towards female audience I love it and you may not and that's OK. If you want the author to know go and support them on their legal platform cause making noise here is yelling into the void. They're not gonna see our comments. If you really want to see the male gaze oriented I would suggest Maneto and then compare how much of a difference tears on a withered flower serve us. Out of 100 I would sag 20% men come and read this. The rest of the audience are female

    Mausi November 14, 2025 11:58 pm
    Well I don't agree with you. I feel this Manhwa is very much focus towards female audience I love it and you may not and that's OK. If you want the author to know go and support them on their legal platform cau... Sage

    Wait. Is the comment section no longer for discussing how people feel about the webtoon or manga here? lol. It’s not that serious and I’m not saying the art or story is shit. I’m liking it but just saying that a lot of the times female smut tends to focus more on the woman’s body than the man’s and it’d be nice to get more than just a few butt shots of the dude vs the loads of breast and butt shots of the lady. If you don’t feel the same, that’s fine. :)

    liy2002 November 15, 2025 1:25 am
    Wait. Is the comment section no longer for discussing how people feel about the webtoon or manga here? lol. It’s not that serious and I’m not saying the art or story is shit. I’m liking it but just saying... Mausi

    as a girl i agree with you , i was just saying that the one is actually more balanced than other smut in that regard , sure na hae soo boobs can steal the show sometimes , but artist do give at lot of attention to tae ha as well