Freaking bad writing on author’s part UGH this frustrated me so much

Bumblebee November 16, 2025 4:30 am

Freaking bad writing on author’s part UGH this frustrated me so much

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    Spartanae November 16, 2025 5:47 am

    Nah, that’s just a bad translation

    Bumblebee November 17, 2025 5:48 pm
    Nah, that’s just a bad translation Spartanae

    Oh I’m sorry, I think you may have misunderstood my comment. I meant bad writing in the sense that Female Lead (FL) is supposed to be the intelligent type, and for whatever reason, she cannot see 4-5 obvious RED FLAG/HINTS that this family of 3 that owns the hotel they’re in have bad intentions. And she even IGNORED the instructions in the memo given to her by the ML to not open the door for anyone and yet still opened the door. There gotta be a way to write that out to still proceed with the plots without making the FL seems like a stupid dense idiot who can’t get a hint. Hence, bad writing because the author cannot go around that without intentionally making the character looks dumb af.

    Spartanae November 18, 2025 2:43 pm
    Oh I’m sorry, I think you may have misunderstood my comment. I meant bad writing in the sense that Female Lead (FL) is supposed to be the intelligent type, and for whatever reason, she cannot see 4-5 obvious ... Bumblebee

    Oh, i gotcha