Please this is just my opinion

XxGxx November 21, 2025 7:34 pm

To be honest, the story itself had potential. But I feel the author doesn't know how to handle such dark themes. I read the entire main story, and I always felt that the MC only stayed with the ML out of pity, because he knows the ML is completely obsessed with him. Not to mention that the ML didn't have a redemption arc, "Oh, but he killed that blond guy," he killed him because his property (MC) was in danger. And the multiple times the MC was violated; that point was simply erased and used only to give the characters a romantic engine that, by the way, led nowhere. The two have zero chemistry. The story could have been much more interesting if all these points had been used correctly (if you want to write stories involving rape, please use them correctly). Plot: 3/10 Art: 7/10 A potential that was completely lost...

Responses
    dilfs November 21, 2025 8:43 pm

    Hard agree. I also don’t enjoy how the side stories turn into some kind of comedy thing. I mean yes the MC has gotten therapy but like, this story was WAY too dark for it to turn out like this haha