I wanted it to be more dramatic and if they had made the bottom realize how much he actually loved him through jealousy (also cause I was extremely jealous for the top) it would’ve added more spice and flair. But overall good story even without the extra drama
i also do love a little jealousy arc but imo itll be tricky to write jealousy for someone like the bottom whose constantly pushing the top away for what he deemed is good
I wanted it to be more dramatic and if they had made the bottom realize how much he actually loved him through jealousy (also cause I was extremely jealous for the top) it would’ve added more spice and flair. But overall good story even without the extra drama