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Hear, hear!
Me too, the premise was very good but the execution is getting worse every chapter
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Hear, hear!
Me too, the premise was very good but the execution is getting worse every chapter
Uhhhhh wtf… tbh I think it would’ve been a stronger story if we had no reason to hate the ex(?)/original world bf/blonde hair and stayed consistent with the unrequited love from the beginning. I don’t think it would make the FL love the blonde hair dude more but it would’ve produced more complex relationships / moral qualms for us as as readers. In this essay I will…..