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And just as a I thought, the comparison to this would be pure and utter garbage. It’s actually such a disrespect to the fans of the original (I’ll keep calling it that because this doesn’t deserve to even be called a sequel). Basically, they made the ML from the original, turn into a nonsensical villain cheating and what not, and he gets replaced with a random new dude. The FL fucks the neighbor for the first part, and then majority of the story is her fucking the blue haired brother, and then blue haired brother cheats too with his baby mama, then she cuts things off, then he immediately dies in a car accident. Then she gets together with the neighbor in the last few chapters. Basically a worse retelling of the original plot where the FL ends up with the least focused guy at the very end. I’m convinced the author was just bored and wanted to get rid of previous love interests from the original and wanted to add in some random new character. It really convinces me that the author wanted to just write ntr hentai/porno when they went into full detail with the guys fucking the side chicks. It’s crazy how the author didn’t have the brain to come up with anything new. And tbh the art got worse compared to the original too.
Can you actually imagine every good story you read and liked, gets a sequel and then they made the MLs cheat and turn the plot into dog shit? It’s genuinely such a disgusting disrespect to fans of the original work. I’d say proud to finally justifiably read this illegally.
Came back to point out that in general nine times out of ten whenever a popular story creates a sequel YEARS LATER, often times it is ass. Mainly because such authors revisit their popular story and don’t actually know how to write more other than creating more problems or repeating the exact same plot. (This happened with peach girl, mermaid melody, and shugo chara). Note that sequels often fail, not SEASON two. Huge difference. The same is often the case for movies. Don’t trust sequels yall, especially if they take years to be published.
(the original of this one ended in 2018 and sequel was created in 2024-2025)
I don't know but the passion and the sheer angry logic used into writing this text is perfect, you got yourself a follower haha. Not to mention i once semi-read some of her early artworks, and i can testify it has always been exactly like this from the very start. There is the usual Mc (male or female) being abused and passed around to no end, complete ntr garbage, no definition of the plot whatsoever, just trauma and p*rn. She got great art style but i absolutely don't recommend her artwork. I'm not really surprised this is the same old repetitive formula used for the plot, most likely that's her favorite "romance" scenery she likes to portray only, and that's being generous wording it. Anyway thank you for your sensible warning, i am most likely not gonna read this haha (⌒▽⌒)
I’m fr sick. This author is actually evil for this. You mean to tell me the author couldn’t have gotten creative and just come up with a NEW story with NEW CHARACTERS?? They fucked up their story on their own for the sake of more shitty drama and porno plots. I actually liked the ending of the original story because she ended up with the healthiest guy who was around her age. The only she had a normal relationship with and didn’t immediately jump into sex. They looked so happy and sweet, free from all the mess the older adults made. WTF do you mean the author did all this crap to give blue head another chance after blue head chose his baby mama over her in the first place.
This is actually so irritating. It’s not in character whatsoever with yuha either. The entire time yuha was on FL’s side in the original story and was yearning for her. FL is also gonna be passed around yet again by 3 men. The author is seriously fucking up their own story probably to milk whatever success they had before. It’s like Peach Girl getting a sequel to only have the same general plot so the author could make more money off of it.
I’m telling yall, if anyone else who finished the original story sees this, DO NOT READ THIS. This is pure garbage and throws EVERYTHING to shit. And this is coming from someone who never says to “don’t read,” because I usually believe ppl should make their own opinions. But this actually ruins everything both about how you see author, the characters, and the plot. I don’t consider this trash canon. This is like a crappy fanfic self insert where the author just wants to have angst while getting in tons of sex scenarios. Author has officially gotten to their lowest with this one
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