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I agree. I didn't have the time to feel tension that the plot was already "exposed" so I was like 'meh' and was not impressed at all
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I agree. I didn't have the time to feel tension that the plot was already "exposed" so I was like 'meh' and was not impressed at all
I know this is a short story, probably less than 10 chapter but with this kind of plot, the author could've made it at least 20 or something so I can at least feel the tension and suspense, you know?