The other story was so mature and nice, this one is so anticlimatic and kind of “stupid�...

Jessy December 1, 2025 6:07 am

The other story was so mature and nice, this one is so anticlimatic and kind of “stupid” they dont have the same nice manerism from before, its just so childish. I bought the first story from the author, came here to check this one out before buying it to, glad i did it its not the kind of story i was expecting sadly

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    shar December 1, 2025 2:57 pm

    ok so im not the only one thinking this everything feels too much lighter and playful compared to the first one and i quite literally cannot rock with it...like what happened to everyones edge, why is everyones eyes brighter now

    KiyoshiDot December 11, 2025 6:31 pm

    The strength of this story was their maturity. Yiyoung was younger but full of life but down to earth. Daehyung was the mature older man with calm and experience. But in these sidestories he's constantly freaking out and acting childish. These chapters really ruined everything...

    Jessy December 12, 2025 1:52 pm
    The strength of this story was their maturity. Yiyoung was younger but full of life but down to earth. Daehyung was the mature older man with calm and experience. But in these sidestories he's constantly freaki... KiyoshiDot

    Agree, I was expecting it to be more mature and to develop their relationship a little deeper, even the smut scenes dont have the same details and tenderness as the 1st story. I just wished their love would have more mature and maybe deeper troubles if the author wanted to add more challenges and fights in their love life