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The only reason why im this harsh is because babies are a CRITICAL part of the plot. If you don't write them well then I'm not gonna enjoy the story
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The only reason why im this harsh is because babies are a CRITICAL part of the plot. If you don't write them well then I'm not gonna enjoy the story
These stories never get babies right
(Trigger warning: opinion) Any attempt to make them look cute makes them ugly to me. How tf does a baby that doesn't look younger than 2 have a head FULL of hair
I highly recommend you guys read "Sunny Days." Ho's (mc) baby is both realistic in the way she acts while still being super cute. Once you realize how a baby is SUPPOSED to be written you'll find a lot of the babies in these stories less endearing lolol