yeah idk how to explain but it feel like the chemistry is not the same as before hmmm maybe the flow idk
Wait! I was just thinking this! It seems a little choppier… not as intimate…
Yeah exactly it lacked the fluidity it had before
Yeah I couldn't get into it at all it's like something was stopping it like every minute xd
This whole story is just a big mess compared to the on or off one. Completely unnecessary like if they wanted to write about this, they could have put it in on or off instead creating another story with it
Ig, I just fount this as a sequal no big deal but I do think that the quality has gone down.
I couldn't read it at all. It seems just like a lot of steamy moments with some unrelated talk between that mostly doesn't seem to matter anyway. And the steamy stuff is more a turn off for me because they now have a strange behavior. The younger one seems so much younger to me. He acts like a child in so many ways that it makes me feel uncomfortable when they get intimate and... It even than has nothing of the feeling they had in the main story.
Is it just me or are the sex scenes getting worse compared to on or off