I've only bothered to read the first few chapters and came back to see how it's going and ...

Monitortone December 13, 2025 12:51 pm

I've only bothered to read the first few chapters and came back to see how it's going and huh?? I thought it was a different dorito shaped, tattooed ultra buff guy. I dunno how well his 'redemption arc' went so I can't comment on it but I also hate how the mc is written as a victim. Bro needs to grow some brains and some balls, set some boundaries and shit...
Is Jaekyung's hair fluffy to make him look friendly? I'm not falling for that.

Responses
    Bunny December 13, 2025 2:13 pm

    If you're literally not reading the story, wtf do you think your critique is any way warranted?

    Monitortone December 14, 2025 11:25 am

    My bad man, I stated how little I've read as a warning about how my opinion might be limited but I was still just sharing my thoughts at the moment. Even so, I still read over 20 chapters and I don't think that an attempt at redemption works when these characters are still being put in a relationship with each other despite the prior abuse.

    I wrote this at like 4am so my review was kinda wack.

    Bunny December 14, 2025 7:42 pm
    My bad man, I stated how little I've read as a warning about how my opinion might be limited but I was still just sharing my thoughts at the moment. Even so, I still read over 20 chapters and I don't think that... Monitortone

    Respectfully, you're not reading the story so why tf do you care and are you commenting here??

    Monitortone December 15, 2025 12:32 pm
    Respectfully, you're not reading the story so why tf do you care and are you commenting here?? Bunny

    And why are you responding? I just explained I was sharing my own opinion as is this point of commenting on this site, my opinion which I made clear was from a limited perspective. Nevermind, ig I'm just falling for rage bait rn.