also fuck it im going on another tangent cus its like i tried to have an open mind about it cus sure whatever hes a sadist thats fine i dont really care about that but why does the fl not have any masochistic tendencies at all? even during the sex it was just painful but she was like well i prefer this to getting whipped 30 times
like dude come on i just feel like it's written in a way that its not enjoyable for anyone reading, like i cant think of what niche enjoys the fl just sort of shrugging and going well this sucks but it could be worse i guess it just feels like a very weird mixture of trying to put light hearted humor into an abusive relationship story and i think if i could figure out the mls point of view maybe i wouldnt be so harsh but he has no child hood trauma of any kind to excuse his actions, and i cant find his monologues regarding the fl other than 'he enjoyed sex with her because it was his first time' and reading a quote about him 'anyone with masochistic tendencies love him' that was written in the story while the fl is like just trying to avoid him is so
where the fuck r the spoilers for this actually cus i need 2 know what the end game of this is and why he even started it
read some of the novel and i just got irritated dude is actually completely 1d and has no redeeming qualities so i need 2 know more bc it seemed like it wasnt that much farther than what we have here... otherwise i fear theyve been overshadowed as the parents are a better couple than them they at least enjoy fucking each other