Definitely feels like the authors first time putting two older characters together, they s...

LeatherKitten December 20, 2025 9:37 am

Definitely feels like the authors first time putting two older characters together, they seemed a bit at a loss with what to do and how to portray them realistically. Pacing feels off, not as seamless a story as it could be.

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    stars_nstuff December 20, 2025 10:04 am

    ughh yess, it was so weird i felt like the main character kept getting younger?? in personality and how he was drawn with each chapter. definitely didnt feel like mature men.

    LeatherKitten December 20, 2025 10:13 am
    ughh yess, it was so weird i felt like the main character kept getting younger?? in personality and how he was drawn with each chapter. definitely didnt feel like mature men. stars_nstuff

    Glad I wasn’t the only one! Shame, had potential. One of those rare times when a BL was better as a oneshot.