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I know right??? The incest for completely unnecessary and poorly executed.
Agree! I would like this yaoi but incest is just no-no for me. + "Development" of the relationship is just weird.
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this would be a million times better if they didnt try to shove the Incest in. it's just not realistic for either of them to be so ok with fucking eachother. I MEAN, imagine if the older brother you've hated bc he's better in every way is the ass you've been fucking near-daily. you wouldnt just laugh it off and suddenly have a lovey relationship. there's just not enough angst; this wouldve been better if the aniki was replaced by someone from school or a childhood friend, or if the incest factor was better explored.