WHAT AN ASS- ARGHHH ITS CUTE BUT THE WAY IT WAS PORTRAYED AT THE END- WAS SO SHIT-
The whole thing and the concept was okay and it was interesting. It's just, I wasn't able to get into it a lot cause I couldn't feel what the characters were really feeling- like for the ending.
If seme-kun's expressions when he told uke to contact him was clearer and more sparkly, there'd be a difference. And if they showed better how uke was really REALLY happy, it'd be SO MUCH WORTH READING CAUSE YOU'D BE ABLE TO SEE HOW THEY'RE ACTUALLY IN LOVE AND HOW THEIR FEELINGS HAVE FINALLY REACHED EACH OTHER AFTER 10 YEARS!!!
WHAT AN ASS- ARGHHH ITS CUTE BUT THE WAY IT WAS PORTRAYED AT THE END- WAS SO SHIT-
The whole thing and the concept was okay and it was interesting. It's just, I wasn't able to get into it a lot cause I couldn't feel what the characters were really feeling- like for the ending.
If seme-kun's expressions when he told uke to contact him was clearer and more sparkly, there'd be a difference. And if they showed better how uke was really REALLY happy, it'd be SO MUCH WORTH READING CAUSE YOU'D BE ABLE TO SEE HOW THEY'RE ACTUALLY IN LOVE AND HOW THEIR FEELINGS HAVE FINALLY REACHED EACH OTHER AFTER 10 YEARS!!!