Hmmmm.....

noobody September 16, 2017 8:01 pm

I guess it was okay. The chemistry between the MCs was portrayed nicely, and the art is good, but there was no love, even though the story had so many situations where they couldv'e developed greater feeling. I found the seme especially unattached, and I generally don't like where the MCs first time is with another person.

Responses
    acornholic September 16, 2017 9:11 pm

    agree!

    Dr.Bleight September 17, 2017 4:03 pm

    I also hate that he made him slut around first and then decided to monopolise him, leaves a bad after taste in my mouth. This kind of heartless shit... (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸

    Anonymous September 17, 2017 4:14 pm
    I also hate that he made him slut around first and then decided to monopolise him, leaves a bad after taste in my mouth. This kind of heartless shit... (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 Dr.Bleight

    I hate that as well and have seen it in other yaoi. It's like the authors think "I want the seme to make him sleep with others...but also I want the seme to be possessive over him." No. Pick one.

    noobody September 17, 2017 5:33 pm
    I also hate that he made him slut around first and then decided to monopolise him, leaves a bad after taste in my mouth. This kind of heartless shit... (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸 Dr.Bleight

    Ikr! It felt like the seme decided the uke was sexy enough for him after he'd already half made the guy a prostitute.

    youraedthiswrogn November 20, 2017 8:16 am

    This is literally everything i was just thinking after having read this just now. I left a comment higher up expanding a little on my thoughts, but the gist was that the seme comes across too okay with everything.

    noobody November 20, 2017 3:04 pm
    This is literally everything i was just thinking after having read this just now. I left a comment higher up expanding a little on my thoughts, but the gist was that the seme comes across too okay with everythi... youraedthiswrogn

    You got that right. It was also sad because the story had so much potential and could've been so much better!! The whole biker thing is damn sexy, and the art was real good. What a waste. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    youraedthiswrogn November 21, 2017 6:39 am
    You got that right. It was also sad because the story had so much potential and could've been so much better!! The whole biker thing is damn sexy, and the art was real good. What a waste. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 noobody

    100% agree, if the seme wasn't basically a damn eunuch there could have been real, honest sexual attraction displayed rather than the possessiveness shown. They spend the entire manga trying (and kinda failing) to get us to see the silent sexual attraction between the uke and seme, but when they finally have sex it's so anti-climactic... I felt more emotion when he lost his virginity...

    noobody November 22, 2017 7:18 pm
    100% agree, if the seme wasn't basically a damn eunuch there could have been real, honest sexual attraction displayed rather than the possessiveness shown. They spend the entire manga trying (and kinda failing... youraedthiswrogn

    You're right about there being emotion when he lost his virginity, alright. The horror!! I spent every second hoping the sense would barge in and he never did. #-.-)

    noobody November 22, 2017 7:19 pm

    *seme not sense