About the new bad guy...

TheNim September 19, 2017 3:22 pm

So, the author needs more drama and I understand, but you don't thicken the plot by introducing an actual freaking *demon* because a interesting well written "rival" was too difficult to write. I mean, this dude didn't suffer from a trauma that turned him into the evilest devil on the planet, no he was born this way. And that's so stupid. He doesn't even have a *reason* to be doing all of this.
I mean, what the fuck? Red eyes? Yandere tendencies since tender age? Psychotic behavior? What am I reading? He's just randomly obsessed with the co protagonist because the plot needed it. What LE fuck.

The writing of this manhwa was finally getting better (and I was kinda starting to like the main character) and then they pull this nonsensical freak out of their asses?!
I hate him, but not because he's unpleasant and mean or something: he's written like shit.
He's so uninteresting I'm just hoping someone kills him or something before Kang Jinha even gets to confront him so he's out of the way and the story finally ends.
That flashback hurt me physically, and not because it's sad or some shit, it's just bad.
Sorry for the rant but I hate shitty writing.

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