Responses
There are a ton of mistranslation in this chapter. The chapter has much better flow in the raw.
That is very likely true, but I felt that whole panels showing sequences of the story were missing. It is that which gives that choppy, pages missing feeling, not the likely mistranslations that may be there.
While the basic outline of the story was fine, the delivery felt a bit choppy. Like there was some pages missing here and there. It just literally felt like they edited out bits and pieces to cut down the size of the chapters and hoped the the readers wouldn't mind filling in the gaps themselves. While I'm capable of filling in the gaps, it just is poorly done if the feeling I get when reading is of pages missing.