My Thoughts

ArdenWinter November 4, 2017 9:04 pm

This story had great potential at the beginning, but as it progressed personalities, relationships and the plot became rather vague and detached feeling. Everyone's backstories could have used a bit more definition, especially for some of the characters introduced later: it was clear they had some relation to the main characters, but it was just confusing and lacked meaning as a result. The pacing and resolution could have been better. About 15% of this story was the introduction to the relationship that began between Minoh and Junoh, 7% was focused on their relationship after it had really started , 75% was watching Junoh going through a (partially self-created) angsty mess -throughout which we practically forget that Cha Minoh even exists as a character-, and then 3% was sudden resolution of conflict with a very dissatisfying sense of reconciliation that seemed was also under-supported.

Responses
    Fujoishi101 November 5, 2017 12:44 am

    Yeah... and the latter half made absolute no f*cking sense. Dropped it at ch. 79 and was just done. Even though there was like 5 chapters left....

    anisima November 6, 2017 11:49 pm

    I Totally agree with you! It was kind of frustrating how Minoh was forgotten in the story, that´s what it looks like for me at least .