'What was the concept of this series?'
•you'll be enlightened after the series' done.
'why did she make a story that was centered around a character who was already dead?'
•to make an interesting story perhaps.
'it almost feels like, at some point, she lost control over this story.'
•no worries, it's just your feeling
'To me pretty much everything felt unfinished and underdeveloped'
•..it's still ongoing, so yeah.
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I accidentally voted you down and now manga go won't let me change it but I totally agree. So much potential down the drain... It ended on a cliffhanger with so many plot holes it might as well be a fishnet. But if pretty art and a bit of gay here and there was what a reader came for, they certainly got it.
The story's finished. There are going to be a few extras/side stories but that's it. The main story is over.
..and here I was waiting for more *deep long sigh*. Thanks for that info. Can't blame the author though if she wants to end her stories at the peak where the mcs are the most at bliss. The story's still nice.. for me, that is. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Preeeaaccchhh
I agree with you right.. The story had too many holes in it.. And no one bothered about the dead guy well maybe he was already dead that's why but still it feels like the end should've been a bit different
gfg
I completly agree all of the plotpoint go into nothing would make more sense if that was the first part and more must follow. This is very disappointing turns out pretty shallow and underdeveloped like the author just wanted to finish.
So I've been had (≧∀≦). The floor's now all yours.
Agreed, there was like zero character development and especially the last part feels so rushed. What's gonna happen to the twin brother and that crazy guy? What's it gonna take for him to start feeling sorry and repenting? Etc etc etc. I'm not happy man, I was so invested in this series I'm not happy with this ending at all.
Totally disagree with everything you said.
calm down ladies, there's nothing we can do with that.
As you read, this was the firs't author's-sensei work, i mean, it was pretty cool, and catching to the end, i know, i also feel like i'd love to see more about the characters or have a longer story but, i can't blame because of that.
aaaalsooo there will be more side stories, maybe there will be what we wanted ; w ;
I totally agree that the plot had way too many holes for the ending to be as satisfying as it could have been; like we got it. Taemin is Taemin no matter in what body he might be in, but there are so many questions I want to ask about Woojin; and that, ultimately, really left me unsatisfied.
I'm pretty sure I won't make many friends with this comment but I still want to write it down because I'm really frustarted right now.
What was the concept of this series? To me it felt like 57 chapters of nothing. She wasted the body-swap storyline. The MC didn't change at all despite the fact that he lived inside the body of a guy who was the exact opposite of him.
The twin storyline was equally disappointing. It was kind of pointless. It was all about the question why the other guy killed himself and why his borther treated him like that. Besides the fact that the reason was extremely generic, why did she make a story that was centered around a character who was already dead? We don't know that other guy and nobody in this story, not even the MC actually cared about that guy. They just used what happend to him to get rid of the brother.
The last chapter: The MC told the brother that his twin-brother had killed himself and the brother didn't ask any questions about that. Why not? Well, we have to come up with our own explanations because Haribo didn't provide one for us... again. Tbh it almost feels like, at some point, she lost control over this story.
To me pretty much everything felt unfinished and underdeveloped. Like she only had a vague idea of what she wanted to write but she didn't have a real plan for her story.
She could've done so much more with this story and it was a real let down for me because at the beginning I thought this could become something really good (now I'm glad I only bought 10 chapters).
I hope that for the next story she'll take more time to work on the storyline and the concept (and she won't stall as much as she did in this story) because I truly believe that she's able to write something great.