I like this story but I can't help but feel like there are pages missing or something... ...

DownTheRabbitHole November 21, 2017 5:58 pm

I like this story but I can't help but feel like there are pages missing or something... I dunno maybe its just me. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

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    lrtwjra November 21, 2017 7:25 pm

    I kno right! For me its cute has good plot but it was too rushed!

    MagicalReader November 21, 2017 9:15 pm

    I think there are some missing.

    Lovety001 November 21, 2017 11:22 pm

    They’re not missing, it’s just that every chapter is short.

    DownTheRabbitHole November 22, 2017 2:08 am
    They’re not missing, it’s just that every chapter is short. Lovety001

    It's not so much the length of the chapters, I've read stories with short chapters but this one just doesn't feel complete somehow

    DownTheRabbitHole November 22, 2017 2:09 am
    I kno right! For me its cute has good plot but it was too rushed! lrtwjra

    Yeah I know what you mean like it has the potential for so much more

    DownTheRabbitHole November 22, 2017 2:11 am
    I think there are some missing. MagicalReader

    I wonder...I've looked for the raws to see if that's the case but I can't find the raws >.<

    chaosblitz56 November 22, 2017 5:14 am
    I wonder...I've looked for the raws to see if that's the case but I can't find the raws >.< DownTheRabbitHole

    It's because they completely skipped over the sex scenes. (or, at least, the one I've gotten to) I dunno if it was part of the original or not, but it seems like it got cut out, since there's quite a bit of build up with pretty much no payoff.

    DownTheRabbitHole November 22, 2017 11:51 am
    It's because they completely skipped over the sex scenes. (or, at least, the one I've gotten to) I dunno if it was part of the original or not, but it seems like it got cut out, since there's quite a bit of bu... chaosblitz56

    You've found raws? Where?

    Lovety001 November 22, 2017 2:29 pm

    The raws are available on the artist pixiv. The translator list it on the credit page EVERY TIME. Check the credits page for the link to the raws. They’ve not skipped on the sex scenes, they don’t exist. I’m saying this because I’ve read the raws and have been since the first chapter.

    chaosblitz56 November 22, 2017 7:55 pm
    You've found raws? Where? DownTheRabbitHole

    Er, no I haven't found the raws. I was just agreeing with you that the chapters felt unfinished.