Like...

TLDR: Red Storm has 99 problems but being coherent aint one. Its all over the place. Many things introduced without explanation or any further development. But, its not a shit show yet, so I'll keep reading.
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Wtf is even going on now? It's like a totally diff story. There are SOOOO many diff elements and side stories. I know what happens in the story, but not whats actually going on. There are only bits and pieces of everything. Usually one storyline finishes before the next is introduced. So far, a ton of shit has been introduced, and then it jumps to the next big thing. So there are like 100 diff big things that need to be dealt with. And each being bigger than the last. So now the first prob seems so small and irrelevant (which, oddly enough, is ok with me because I doubt it'll ever be brought back up again... Vernesis' relation to Yulian's dead mother. THE FAT EMPIRE PRINCE DURING THE TEST THAT GOT TO THE LAST LEVEL AND TURNED OUT TO NOT REALLY BE FAT, BUT A POWERFUL KID, BUT NOT AS POWERFUL AS YULIAN CUZ HE HAD TO DIP OUT WHILE FIGHTING THE DRAGON. And every single last side story having to do wit the other realm/world and whatever the fuck the Master is doing). This story leads EVERYWHERE and NOWHERE at the same damn time.

Lengthy stories have elements that unfold over time. Sometimes hints are dropped and you realize where the story is going as it progresses. Some leave you in the dark until the very end, and then everything makes sense. BUT FOR THIS ONE You'd think that "things will become more clear as the story progresses. I'll just wait it out and keep reading.".... SIKE. This is a loooong ass story to be one that "will make sense at the very end". I'm starting to wonder if the author just making it up as they go? But whatever, I made it this far soooo... *shrug* I'll be right back here next update.