This was a bit ... all over the place . I think the story could have been put together bet...

Grein M December 15, 2017 5:55 am

This was a bit ... all over the place . I think the story could have been put together better so it was less confusing, it has potential.

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    akuma_river June 11, 2018 6:24 am

    It is the three sluttyish brother's finding love, but the baby brothers are possessive of their big brother.

    That is what I got from it. A common trope. Lol