I liked the first story, but couldn't get into the second one. It was well written and thought out, but just not my thing. Melvin and Hugo had a past together, but in waltzes Edo at a most crucial time, right before a juxtapose, managing to sleep with them both but realizing they still loved each other, so he gracefully bows out to leave them to their rekindling. When Hugo came on to Edo it left me wondering what was going on inside Hugo's head. And when Edo gave into to Hugo's advances it made me wonder what was going on inside his head (except he did say something like he couldn't stop himself). And that Melvin just kind of let the whole thing go when he saw Edo and Hugo together left me wondering what was going on inside his head. And when Edo and Hugo were having sex while Melvin was in the other room and could hear them, it left me wondering what the fuck was going on inside all their heads. The first story was a bit more straightforward. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Same here...The second story was a little bit confusing and sad as hell. I see that both ex loved each other but Somehow i could feel something between Hugo and Edo...(I though that they will end up together...) it hurts
I liked the first story, but couldn't get into the second one. It was well written and thought out, but just not my thing. Melvin and Hugo had a past together, but in waltzes Edo at a most crucial time, right before a juxtapose, managing to sleep with them both but realizing they still loved each other, so he gracefully bows out to leave them to their rekindling. When Hugo came on to Edo it left me wondering what was going on inside Hugo's head. And when Edo gave into to Hugo's advances it made me wonder what was going on inside his head (except he did say something like he couldn't stop himself). And that Melvin just kind of let the whole thing go when he saw Edo and Hugo together left me wondering what was going on inside his head. And when Edo and Hugo were having sex while Melvin was in the other room and could hear them, it left me wondering what the fuck was going on inside all their heads.
The first story was a bit more straightforward. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍