Specifically, Levi was just very... stiff. and not in the way he usually is. All of the dialogue was very cliché (which is to be expected) but there wasn't much of a personal spin on it. I could probably point out at least 3 spots where Levi could have said something sarcastic or defensive rather than the cut-and-paste dialogue in here. If you're desperate to get your pregnancy kink satisfied, then you've come to the right dj, but if you want to read about these two characters interacting in a relationship, I suggest you look somewhere else
Specifically, Levi was just very... stiff. and not in the way he usually is. All of the dialogue was very cliché (which is to be expected) but there wasn't much of a personal spin on it. I could probably point out at least 3 spots where Levi could have said something sarcastic or defensive rather than the cut-and-paste dialogue in here. If you're desperate to get your pregnancy kink satisfied, then you've come to the right dj, but if you want to read about these two characters interacting in a relationship, I suggest you look somewhere else