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I think so too! I feel like sometimes the story is a bit confusing, and there actually isn't a lot about their relationship, just a lot of flashbacks
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I think so too! I feel like sometimes the story is a bit confusing, and there actually isn't a lot about their relationship, just a lot of flashbacks
I want to like this but the story is so disjointed... there is zero flow from chapter to chapter, causing whatever mood was built in the previous chapter to be completely forgotten as I try to remember names and events. By the time I put it together (partially), the chapter is over.