I'm not really upset with how this turned out BUT I had initially wanted it to take a more...

adonyx February 27, 2018 3:10 am

I'm not really upset with how this turned out BUT I had initially wanted it to take a more taboo turn? Something a little more angsty?
I enjoyed how there were the 'we shouldn't be doing this feelings' in the beginning. I would have loved to see how that continued to play out after the mom got home and Reiichi continued to mess with them both? How Tsubaki would get jealous and maybe start acting out....or whatever. But it's not my story and I don't even dislike it, so I'm not mad. Lol

Responses
    Tsuikatan February 27, 2018 5:55 am

    You're so twisted (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ that'd be yummy

    adonyx February 27, 2018 6:31 pm
    You're so twisted (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ that'd be yummy Tsuikatan

    Oh, why thank you~ :^) And it rlly would. ლ(´ڡ`ლ)